The polyphonic structure and the dance between French, German, and English create a fascinating sense of displacement, Anna. The boundary between the formal and the informal, the past and the present, is highly effective. Thank you for sharing this experiment. I am honored that it found its way to my evening. 🖤 it made me happy.
this piece is sooo beautiful, blending french german and english is like finding love in every language, despite any barriers. i genuinely love your work as a fellow poet and just subbed :)
Thank you so much Ria that’s so kind of you!!! If you like the languages and also experimental work you should also consider to sub to jeanne (mentioned in the post) because I took the course from her
I’ll also check out your work tomorrow I’m always glad to read new poetry♡
The polyphonic structure and the dance between French, German, and English create a fascinating sense of displacement, Anna. The boundary between the formal and the informal, the past and the present, is highly effective. Thank you for sharing this experiment. I am honored that it found its way to my evening. 🖤 it made me happy.
thank you!! i hoped so much you’d like it!! i never used a second language in a poem before i found you
this piece is sooo beautiful, blending french german and english is like finding love in every language, despite any barriers. i genuinely love your work as a fellow poet and just subbed :)
Thank you so much Ria that’s so kind of you!!! If you like the languages and also experimental work you should also consider to sub to jeanne (mentioned in the post) because I took the course from her
I’ll also check out your work tomorrow I’m always glad to read new poetry♡
We both wrote about blackbirds on the same day x
You read it!!! I didn’t expect it!!!
I love blackbirds they are my favorite birds
And one of them comes often to my place and I image we are friends
Maybe that's what love becomes in the end not a person you can keep but a language the moon learns because your heart can no longer speak it out loud
yeeeeessss maybe.... that's so beautiful
your comment is a poetic fragment itself
thank you so much for this!!
Gorgeous.
thank you so much!! ♡
All you!
I do like the mixed languages. I should try it more!